Peer Edit: Nate

1. Is there a clear point of view?
Not quite, it's very well written but you don't include a solution or clear opinion. Steer away from writing a complaint without a solution.

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
No, and this could be a result from question #1.

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
No it does not, but there really isn't a counterargument with just statistics.

4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
Yes it is. Good statistics.

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
Yes

6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
Yes

7. Is the writing clear?
Yes