Peer Edit: Jessica

1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
Yes, but argue more as to why people should support your opinion.

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
This is one major aspect that the editorial lacks.

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
Your opinion includes the counter argument, but illustrate the actual counter argument as well.

4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
Yes, it is very good because it is different from the majority of editorials concerning abortion.

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
Yes

6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
Yes

7. Is the writing clear?
Yes